I wrote about the above two tonight! I'm wondering if my prose isn't too slow. Anderson's paragraphs move and have a point and mine sometimes wanders around weirdly. I'll have to tighten the paragraphs in editing but I think they're sufficiently evocative at this point.
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sunshowerdandelion) wrote2025-03-12 09:41 pm
