Day 58.1: Difficulty

[sunshowerdandelion]

This is difficult. Getting the tone right for Seiran is getting to be difficult because she's very particular about how she thinks and speaks: She's not flowing sad like Alice, she's not as driven as Reisen, and she's not flamboyant... but also she's not quiet in her head. She's showy but in a muted way. I think her prose should show a low burn, but also that deep down she is rather curious and alive about a lot of things, especially when communicating things to her friends. She should be calmer and more supine compared to Reisen, but at the same time she's not passive. She's trapped passion and getting the right voice for that consistently is difficult.

I think this is a sign that she's at least considering talking to me about the fic.