Day 181.1: Shaky, But Okay

[sunshowerdandelion]

• Still a little shaky today, since I got distracted a lot, but I managed to untangle my stuff a bit. The autopsy was successful I think: I'll try for a rewrite, since the pacing of both drafts got extremely snarled, and I had to make key decisions on some structural things and not be wishy washy.
• Decided that this was going to be an OC-chapter. I was insecure abt having an OC-centered chapter because What would the readers think but no, no, Del has to have a chapter on her own, because this is her book as much as it's Tsukasa's.
• Style is going to be fairly breezy, since Del in-universe doesn't want to bore her readers either. There's going to be fairly compact paragraphs that I hope the readers will be able to follow along with.
• Currently rewriting some parts to make the pacing more deliberate, and not just follow Del's whim. I, as the author, get to ask her to slow down.