Day 105.2 & 106.1: Wanderings
Aug. 30th, 2024 10:29 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
sunshowerdandelionI've been wandering around with Seiran again. I think I'm refining her narrative style, but I could just be wandering around. She's met Rei'sen and I quite liked how I conveyed that (in Seiran's narrative style - remembering she's telling this to actual!Reisen):
I think her style is usually quite dry, but she has little leaps of imagination, like when she describes Rei'sen's face as having a total smallness. Of course in this scene she's trying to convey how dry her life on the moon was, trying to convince Reisen she's acclimatizing okay (and lying to her). But of course she might not to be lying. I really hope the reader will have fun reading through Seiran's multiple self-lies.
She said she was Reisen but then said: Not that Reisen. But she was Reisen now.
I think her style is usually quite dry, but she has little leaps of imagination, like when she describes Rei'sen's face as having a total smallness. Of course in this scene she's trying to convey how dry her life on the moon was, trying to convince Reisen she's acclimatizing okay (and lying to her). But of course she might not to be lying. I really hope the reader will have fun reading through Seiran's multiple self-lies.
