sunshowerdandelion | Day 181.1: Shaky, But Okay (Reply)

Still a little shaky today, since I got distracted a lot, but I managed to untangle my stuff a bit. The autopsy was successful I think: I'll try for a rewrite, since the pacing of both drafts got extremely snarled, and I had to make key decisions on some structural things and not be wishy washy.
Decided that this was going to be an OC-chapter. I was insecure abt having an OC-centered chapter because What would the readers think but no, no, Del has to have a chapter on her own, because this is her book as much as it's Tsukasa's.
Style is going to be fairly breezy, since Del in-universe doesn't want to bore her readers either. There's going to be fairly compact paragraphs that I hope the readers will be able to follow along with.
Currently rewriting some parts to make the pacing more deliberate, and not just follow Del's whim. I, as the author, get to ask her to slow down.