Day 157.1: Stuck on the Opening
Oct. 20th, 2024 09:33 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
As always. I wrote lots and lots and planned lots but stuck on the opening since I don't want Del to be too mopey from the start. She jumps straight into worrying about climate change and I fear I've made the student office where she waits for Ko into an outsize presence. My previous introduction was too breezy, but this one's too grim: I'll have to find a balance.
I think I've found Della's fundamental lie. She lies that she's an inherently harmful person because of her sister's 'inheritance' and the nonsense she's swallowed up about queer people (she wasn't raised anywhere queer-friendly). She's not, but this is the weak underbelly Tsukasa will slice open.
I think I've found Della's fundamental lie. She lies that she's an inherently harmful person because of her sister's 'inheritance' and the nonsense she's swallowed up about queer people (she wasn't raised anywhere queer-friendly). She's not, but this is the weak underbelly Tsukasa will slice open.